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Post by lockesdestiny on Sept 20, 2006 21:16:03 GMT -5
you're kidding me you had to end it there! I want more!
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Post by hightyto on Sept 20, 2006 21:23:38 GMT -5
SAME HERE!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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Post by Campion on Sept 20, 2006 22:04:52 GMT -5
Well, I'm glad to see that my writing can grip such avid readers as you guys. I made that first chapter in about 20 minutes. (Sorry but no, this wasn't the second chapter you were hoping for!)
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Post by lockesdestiny on Sept 22, 2006 21:23:05 GMT -5
both!  |
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Post by hightyto on Sept 22, 2006 21:27:47 GMT -5
im definitly hooked, please write more, and i liked that it was a longer chapter, its awesome!
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Post by Campion on Sept 22, 2006 21:40:52 GMT -5
Thank you both for your support. ;D
I actually already started on the next chapter because I got so bored tonight. About half done with it, too.
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Post by hightyto on Sept 23, 2006 8:08:19 GMT -5
great, cant wait!
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Post by hightyto on Sept 24, 2006 11:13:48 GMT -5
so are you done with the story then?
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Post by Campion on Sept 24, 2006 11:16:30 GMT -5
There's one more chapter. Chapter Three is just supposed to be setting everything up for the fourth. That's why there was no real 'action' in it or anything.
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Post by hightyto on Sept 24, 2006 11:17:05 GMT -5
ohhh okay. well i gotta go again, talk to ya later.
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Post by lockesdestiny on Sept 24, 2006 21:16:16 GMT -5
it seems like there should be another chapter (which would be pretty cool) so explain the ending
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Post by hightyto on Sept 24, 2006 21:18:07 GMT -5
 wait, thats it? your ending it there???
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Post by Campion on Sept 24, 2006 21:52:55 GMT -5
I wouldn't like it to, but there's nothing I can think of that would be satisfying after the end of this chapter. Sorry...
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Post by hightyto on Sept 25, 2006 11:44:50 GMT -5
oh well, thats okay. at least it ended suspensfully  |
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Post by lockesdestiny on Sept 25, 2006 22:00:56 GMT -5
there now thats a cool ending...definally like the graphic scenes...so what is Hoan going to do with the hybrid now?
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wait, thats it? your ending it there??? 