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Post by Campion on Oct 10, 2006 17:55:01 GMT -5
Oh yeah, I wanted to give you a website that automatically generates fantasy names. It has quite a few different filters you can use and the site has helped me out with some short stories I've written. I hope that this site can help you in some way. rinkworks.com/namegen/
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Post by hightyto on Oct 10, 2006 21:15:58 GMT -5
well campion, that site sure helped me! thanks even though it was meant for cree. it really does help!
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Post by Campion on Oct 10, 2006 21:27:29 GMT -5
Oh... I meant that for the whole forum. I just posted it here because this was the first time I actually realized it was in my bookmarks menu. Heh heh...
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Post by cree on Oct 11, 2006 10:42:48 GMT -5
Wow,thanks campion.
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Post by Campion on Oct 11, 2006 18:47:04 GMT -5
No problem, guys. I didn't only focus on bettering 'myself' with the art of writing, ya know. I try to help anyone I can who has some interest in such an activity. It's much healthier than video games or TV (Which I still love to do, of course). ;D
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Post by cree on Oct 12, 2006 10:39:09 GMT -5
Thanks again Campion.That really helped me.His new name is Yarolrain.I'm about to go back and change that in the story.
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Post by cree on Oct 13, 2006 10:21:37 GMT -5
I'll post the next chapter or two over the weekend.I've been busy this week and can't of how to start the next chapter.
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Post by cree on Oct 13, 2006 19:40:17 GMT -5
Chapter 5 ~"Why Me?"~ The seer's cry still rang through the forest.It was late afternoon.The sun shone through the fall forest as it set,making the leaves look even more like fire. "Her...It-its her."The seer said,an ancient and wrinkled paw pointed at Anaka.The small pack gasped.A pup yelled out,"Yay!The evil time will be over soon!"The pup's mother put a paw over his mouth. The pack seer was called Eartha.She was brown but her pelt was now washed with grey had pathches missing.Her eyes,white and milky.Anaka assumed she was blind. Eartha and Dunmore now steped toward Anaka,eyeing her. "Eartha,will you please say the prophcey..."Dunmore commanded. And so Eartha took a deep breath and said:
"In a time of evil and pain The gods will send one of evil's bane Faint of heart and strong of mind, In time she shall find her strength. Seek the alies,strong and true. Brother and Sister packs,friends so true. Friend of all packs,large and wise. The stopper of time is yet to aid you."
Eartha shut her milky orbs and thought."That is not all of it.There is more,but after all,Dunmore,I did hear it in a dream." "That is fine Eartha.Maybe Anaka will learn the rest soon."Dunmore smiled warmly at Anaka. "But,Dunmore,Eartha...How do you know its me?"Anaka asked. "I think this should be spoken of in private."Dunmore whispered to her.The pack let out disapointed sighs. "Come to my cave"Eartha said,"You may come too Loamin.Anak felt a little better.Atleast Loamin would accompany her.Suddenly she and Loamin got the same thought,but yet did not know it,they would always be there for eachother.
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Post by hightyto on Oct 14, 2006 9:24:29 GMT -5
yay new chapter!
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Post by cree on Oct 16, 2006 18:06:13 GMT -5
Chapter 6 ~Fate and Destiny~ Anaka gazed around the crampt confines of Eartha's cave.Dunmore began to speek. "Now Anaka,we all beleive that you really are the one of which the prophecy speeks of."he paused,his thundorous voice still rang in the dank air."The pack nay...the word may be depending upon you.I have sent two messengers,one to the pack of Ever-snow,the other to Ocean Glacier pack.They are young and strong,they shall return shortly." Eartha now spoke,her sightless eyes seemed to saw into Anaka's soul,"Have you ever noticed that our pack has no alphess?" "Yes,I have but I've never really wanted to ask-" "Well, she was killed by some hunters from Moon Bane."Dunmore told her.His gold eyes now wet with tears and were glassy as though he was remembering something.Anaka looked over at Loamin,his head was hung low to show his sympathy. Dunmore continued speaking,"My mate and alphess died in early spring.She went off into the forest after the sun had set....the time when the demons are at the climax of their strenght.She was bitten..."he paused and took a deep breath,"and eaten."He know said in a breathless voice,"You have to stop them,Anaka."
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Post by cree on Oct 18, 2006 18:36:50 GMT -5
I know that chapter was short,but I thought it should end with that.
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Post by cree on Oct 22, 2006 13:02:24 GMT -5
Chapter 7 ~The Curse~ Anaka and Loamin crept over the sleeping forms of the pack members.The pack slept outside most of the time but tonight a light,clod drizzle fell.Eartha was back in her small cave and Dunmore had went off in the woods.Their voices still rang in her ears. "Here."Loamin whispered and lay down.Anaka sat a few inches away.She shivered and wrapped her tail around her legs.She looked over at Loamin,he was fast asleep. Anaka was wide awake.The rain had now stopped and she could see the sky grow lighter.Her head ached and she felt dizzy from lack of sleep. Out of the twilight came a low sound between a howl and a yelp.The slimbering pack jumped to their paws and were alert.Loamin and two other males rushed out to see what had happened.Only seconds later all three of the young wolves voices were heard.The rest of the small pack went out.To their horror they saw the torn body of Birchen,the messenger.Beside him was Dunmore,the alpha.Their fur was turning crimson by the second. "What happened?"gasped Eartha. Birchen opened his mouth to explain,but then he began to shake.He then colasped. "It was the demons..."gasped Dunmore. Eartha walked over to Birchen.She leaned close to the young male,her joints creaking.Birchen's muscular pelt was riddeled with slashes.Eartha leaned closer still.Right below his left ear,were two small holes;around them fur had fallen out and his skin was slowly turning green. "He has been bitten!"Eartha shouted. Birchen lay on the damp ground,still trembling as he fell into a cold faint.
There was no hope for young Birchen.Indeed,he had been bitten by a demon wolf.Also the pack feared for the health of their alpha,Dunmore.
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Post by lockesdestiny on Oct 22, 2006 13:07:48 GMT -5
cant wait to get more into the demons!
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Post by cree on Oct 26, 2006 20:10:17 GMT -5
I think the next chapter will be more about the demons,lockesdestiny.
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Post by cree on Oct 28, 2006 18:53:25 GMT -5
Chapter 8 ~Dire~ On his death bed,Dunmore spoke to his pack.He had said:"My loyal friends,demonic feinds have ruptured our once peaceful realm.As I was in the woods I met Birchen.He told me the other packs would be glad to help destroy the demons.Birchen also told me that the other young messenger,Loakin,had been bitten.Then,Birchen and I was attacked.The she-wolf whom was our assassin,was young.Only about three years.She had a most demonic gleam in her acidic orbs.I had also been told her name was Ielanish.I also heard she is now queen of Moon-Bane and of the Lands of Dispare.Her mate is Yarolrain." He continued with a ratteling breath.He pack listened. "She has a magic power.It is strange...she has bestowed a curse on us all.She said we would all die;one by one."and so,the once noble and proud leader of the Aurora Storm pack was dead.
Yarolrain paced back and forth in his muggy chamber of the volcaneo.It was near the bottom and he had a wonderful veiw of the magma churning at the depths.Demons were said to have came out of here and entered the bodies of the wolvees of Moon-Bane pack. "My king..." Yarolrain turned.He was his son,Anivik. Anivik was young.His pelt was black.But not like the black of the rest of the demons.Anivik's had a sheen to it.Also his eyes were not green or blood red like the other's;his were blue. Anivik bowed to his father.Anivik distured his father.He was so different...Not as cruel as the rest...His voice so gentle and calm. "What?"he comanded his son. "Um,Father,my new mother,umm,the new queen has returned." "Good."said Yarolrain,his lips curling back.His fangs,now even more exposed. Anivik turned his head and dashed from the chamber as Ielanish entered.
Far to the top of the volcaneo,now called the Fang of Ielanish,sat Anivik.Tears flowed from his blue orbs.He sat facing east,toward the forests.He chilled fall wind blowing his pelt. "I'm sick of this."he said and went to a small scrape that had collected some of the rain water fom the past night. He began to roll in it.He had a secret.No one knew it. After a few moments he stood,panting.The silver liquid ran for his pelt.The puddle was now black with ash.Anivik was not pure black.His legs,ears,muzzle,and tail tip were white.He rolled in ash to cover up his marks of pureness. "I shall leave!"he cried to himself."My father is evil and his new mate is-" "Whats that my boy?"Yarolrain stood in the light of the half moon.He was ready to fight.He as willing to kill his own son. Anivik also stood,all of his nervous fear had gone. "This is who I really am!"Anivik yelled,his white markings glowing.
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